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Testimonials & Portfolio

Clear, supportive, and professional book editing can enhance your story and improve your writing skills. As a writer, having a confident, knowledgeable, and trustworthy editor in your corner can set you above your competition and make your writing stand out amongst an ocean of other stories. With more than ten years in the publishing industry, I offer an inclusive, compassionate, and unique approach to editing, but don’t just take it from me. Read the testimonials from real, paying clients, creative colleagues, and fellow publishing professionals who I’ve worked with over the last decade.

*This is not a comprehensive list of my clientele or portfolio. Clients may prefer not to provide a public testimonial and contracts commonly include confidentiality clauses prohibiting disclosure of services or client identities. Clients and colleagues who would prefer to remain anonymous in their feedback online, have the option to withdraw attribution at any time. If you would like to leave a review of your experience working with me, or if you’d like to request anonymity, please email Hello@PaytonHayes.com.

Verified Client Testimonials & Colleague Feedback

2024


2019


2018

Verified Client Testimonial

“We hired Payton Hayes as an editor for our self-published photography book. It was definitely a learning experience for us, not having need of an editor for our three previous books. Payton endured through us not reading the entire packet of information she first sent, misunderstandings (due to both of us communicating to her but not with each other), us sending changes to her before they were actually ready (in the wrong format), delays for a variety of reasons, and our stubbornness or lack of compliance. She was probably quite frustrated with us, but Payton adapted and adjusted for us over and over again. She sent new communications and re-sent information, including the first communication, several times to be sure we understood why she was doing the edits she was doing. She explained and expounded on where she was coming from with the edits and on what she wanted us to know. And in the middle of it all (when we switched horses in midstream, so to speak, on what we wanted from her) Payton never missed a beat, smoothly reorienting herself and forging onward. Let There Be Light: Images of Oklahoma is a better book due to Payton Hayes’s editing help. She did more than edit our work and words; it was vividly apparent that she did massive amounts of research into the animals and locations in Steven's photographs.”

—Karen & Steven Hunter, Let There Be Light: Images of Oklahoma (2024)

Service(s): Copyediting (Heavy) & Proofreading

Creative Colleague Feedback

“Payton is an absolute pleasure to work with, especially because she puts the concerns of her clients—and even potential clients—at the forefront. Payton responded to a TikTok video my daughter posted about a book I’m writing. I’m a veteran writer, but a novice book author. Payton immediately asked thought-provoking, insightful questions to determine the exact scope and intention of what I was doing. She then forwarded my project to contacts she felt were better aligned to help me. She also gave me frank insights on what to expect, the publishing process and the publishing industry. And never—never!—did she ask for anything in return or any commitment to working exclusively with her. I felt my interests always took precedent for her. That unsolicited commitment to me—a total stranger—and my project is why I recommend her to aspiring and veteran authors alike. Payton will take the time to get to know you and your book and determine the right course of action for it, even if it does not involve her. I found her to be a voice of experience that I could trust. Thank you, Payton!” 

—Scott Smith, Debut Children’s Book Author and Podcast Consultant (2024)

Service(s): Networking & Author Mentoring (Pro Bono)

Verified Client Testimonial

Service(s): Technical Copyediting & Proofreading

“Payton assisted me editorially in the development of my marketing materials for my medical practice and I was very impressed with her work. She took the time to research the related topics in order to address the content from an informed position and it showed. At times, Payton would touch base to clarify more nuanced perspectives in order to develop an idea to its potential. She was flexible and communicative throughout the process. I feel her services are a wonderful value and I plan to work with her again soon.” 

—Chance Whinnery, “Dreaming Leaves Psychiatry Practice” (Website Copy) (2024)

Verified Client Testimonial

Service(s): Copyediting & Proofreading

“I had the pleasure of working with Payton Hayes on editing and polishing some crucial documents for me. I can confidently say that her expertise and professionalism exceeded my expectations. Her keen attention to detail and dedication to ensuring the documents were representative of my voice and error-free were truly impressive. She not only provided valuable insights and suggestions that significantly improved the quality of the documents but also demonstrated a genuine desire for helping me achieve my goals. Her timely responses and clear communication made the entire editing process smooth and efficient. Thanks to Payton’s assistance, I was able to effectively convey my message with my intended audience. I would recommend her services to anyone in need of editing and writing support. I am thankful for her insight and support which helped make my writing experience much easier and less stressful. I would most definitely work with her again in the future.”

—Rachel Allen, “Tulsa Artist Fellowship Package” (Application Materials) (2024)

Verified Client Testimonial

Service(s): Beta Reading & Copyediting

“Payton provided a beta reading service for the first few chapters of a story I am writing. The quality of her feedback was great, not to mention very useful. She was able to highlight areas where I could improve my writing and gave valuable suggestions about the genre I'm writing in, which were really helpful. She provided her feedback quickly and in an easy to digest, constructive way (something that is not always easy when you are critiquing someone else's writing!) I wouldn't hesitate to consider her for further editing work in the future.”

Katie Owen, The Vampire Prophecies: The Turning (2018)

Verified Client Testimonial

Service(s): Developmental Editing

“Payton Hayes has an excellent set of eyes. My book was edited by Payton and I have to admit that her editing prowess was what it needed. I followed up with a call to ask about her methodology for editing and she gave me more sound advice. As a writer, I value creating a good, captivating story and Payton’s editing service no doubt, has enhanced my storyline. Payton kept me abreast throughout the process and was a wonder to work with. She is the real deal and I strongly recommend using Payton for your next writing project.”

Eric Reese, Sins of the Son (The Frank Lucianus Mafia Series, Book 1) (2019)

Verified Client Testimonial

Service(s): Proofreading

“I have been writing for myself for quite some time and I have always been apprehensive about seeking editorial services. I was totally clueless and had no idea where to start. After getting a chance to explore my options I fell upon Payton's services. I was reassured from the start about the importance of the editing process to further my strength as a writer. She provided detailed notes and was very quick to get edits back to me with reliable correspondence when there was a delay. Her edits are very concise. She takes the time to explain the reasoning behind her suggestions which is great for refreshing one's knowledge of proper grammar and how your work is viewed from the reader's perspective. Overall, I am very happy with her edits and will continue to seek her advice as I explore writing with an audience in mind!”

Julius The Robot, “Hard Lessons in Modern Magic from the Midwest” (2019)


Verified Client Testimonial

Service(s): Developmental Editing (2018)

“I delivered Ms. Hayes what I believed to be a finished novel, and what I got back exceeded my expectations. She not only caught the issues that I knew of, but also ones that I either overlooked or hadn’t seen. Her comments about the overall novel were thoughtful and appropriate. Too many people who call themselves editors will just throw the prose into a program, but Ms. Hayes took the time to read the entire manuscript and was able to give excellent insight from an outside perspective. I have always been a believer in that you can’t edit your own work, and Ms. Hayes’ attention to detail proved my belief right. I can only speak to her ability to edit a fantasy novel, but from what I have seen about her abilities leads me to believe that she would be successful at other genres.”

Dana Journey, The Apprentices, (The Crimson Guard Trilogy, Book 1) (2018)

Editorial & Creative Portfolio

Due to the nature of electronic editing, it is a challenge to provide visual examples of my work, with most of it being confidential or text-based. For this reason, I happily provide clients with a complimentary sample edit to demonstrate my skills and approach to writing and editing. That said, below is a list of the projects for which I have completed either paid or pro bono services and at the bottom of the page is a gallery of screenshots from various editing projects, where I’ve left comments or critiques for clients to accept or reject. I have made no edits to the comments themselves, for transparency, but timestamps, names, or any other personally identifying information has been redacted from these images to protect client confidentiality.

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns about the list below or the gallery in this section, please direct your inquiry to Hello@PaytonHayes.com.

2024


  • Copyeditor | Let There Be Light (Photography) by Steven Hunter

  • Technical Copyeditor & Proofreader | “Dreaming Leaves Psychiatry Practice” (Website Copy) by Chance Whinnery

  • Assistant Copyeditor | New Plains Review Spring Volume by Shay Rham

  • Assistant Copyeditor | The Central Dissent: A Journal of Gender and Sexuality by Shay Rham

  • Assistant Copyeditor | 1890: A Journal of Undergraduate Research by Shay Rham

  • Copyeditor & Proofreader | “Tulsa Artist Fellowship Package” (Application Materials) by Rachel Allen

  • Presenter/Speaker | “Putting It Together” (Live Poetry Reading) by Zachary Scalzo

  • Presenter/Speaker | Human Constellations (Symposium) by Tobias Wray and UCO’s College of Liberal Arts

  • Author/Producer | “Feast For Aphrodite,” “The Myth of Medusa,” and “Senseless Without Love” (Animated Poetry Readings) by Payton Hayes

  • Speaker & Event Organizer | “Spring Sonnet Workshop” (Presentation & Writing Workshop) by The Golden Pony Creative Writers Guild at The University of Central Oklahoma

  • Speaker & Event Organizer | “OWS Spring Meeting(s)” (Monthly Writing Workshops) by The Oklahoma Writers Society

2023

2022


  • Assistant Copyeditor & Lead Poetry Copyeditor | New Plains Review Fall Volume by Shay Rham

  • Assistant Copyeditor | The Central Dissent: A Journal of Gender and Sexuality by Shay Rham

  • Assistant Copyeditor | 1890: A Journal of Undergraduate Research by Shay Rham

  • Copyeditor | “The Personal War: A Story of Vietnam” (Stage Play Script) by Kristi Reise-Burgher

  • Guest Writer | “How To Overcome Writer’s Block” (Blog) by Shayla Raquel

  • Author/Contributor | Stories for the Road: How Trauma Affects Internal Communication by Taleaha Lee (2022)

2020


  • Assistant Copyeditor | Pegasus XL by Kristin Hahn

  • Lead/Solo Painter | “Two Brain To The Humanities (Small-Scale Mural) by Payton Hayes

  • Developmental Editor | Hunted by Katie Owen

  • Developmental Editor | Broken by Katie Owen

  • Developmental Editor | Shattered by Katie Owen

  • Developmental Editor | Blood Bound by Katie Owen

2019



  • Developmental Editor | Sins of the Son (Frank Lucianus Mafia Series, Book 1) by Eric Reese

  • Proofreader | “Hard Lessons in Modern Magic from the Midwest” by Julius The Robot

  • Author/Contributor | Pegasus XXXIX by Kristin Hahn

  • Assistant Painter | “No Limitations” (Small-Scale Mural) by Fall 2019 Special Topics In Art: Murals

  • Author/Publisher | Quiet Magic, A Collection Of Poems by Payton Hayes

  • Writer & Producer | “The Cure” (A World of Warcraft Parody of “The Cure” by Lady Gaga) by Sharm


2018


  • Beta Reader & Copyeditor | The Vampire Prophecies: The Turning by Katie Owen

  • Developmental Editor | The Apprentices (Crimson Guard Trilogy, Book 1) by Dana Journey

  • Author/Contributor | Pegasus XXXVIII by Kristin Hahn

2017


  • Journalist & Copyeditor | The 15th Street News by Darcy Delaney-Nelson

  • Journalist & Copyeditor  | The 6420 Magazine by Darcy Delaney-Nelson

  • Author/Contributor | Pegasus XXXVII by Theresa Walther (2017)

2016-2014


  • Lead Painter | “Drama” (Small-Scale Mural) by 2015-2016 MCHS Advanced Drama

  • Lead Painter | “Rollercoaster” (Small-Scale Mural) by 2014-2015 MCHS Advanced Drama

  • Lead Painter | “The Yellow Brick Road” (Canvas Backdrop & Stage Set Design) by Lukas LaRue (2014)